hmm. I wish they al had the same vibrancy as the first two. I realize that the text is the consistent part, but I think the feel of the pictures should all match your cover or be completely random all together. I think you should remove some of the question marks from the "where to" picture. I can't tell what the last word in the 4th image (not counting cover). I love the arrangement of the word "change," but I am not sure I like the font, and I wish the picture had something more to it. See if you can take pictures of really metallic things. When I think of your artwork stye I think shiny. It's going to be beautiful. Keep up your hard work!
The images do look great. You are right, it is very difficult to read them.I am having a hard time connecting each image with a notion of fetish that you write about, I just feel cold and industrial space with words that do not seem to have anything to do with that space.
I guess, while I am loving the look of the book, I am generally confused. I am getting more of a sense that the book is more of a portfolio of your abilities and tastes than having a conceptual direction. You were on to something--bring it back.
The red image is my favorite, I am attracted to its vibrancy. Runner up: the pipes, nice use of the object. Overall, very clean. See you in class Monday, I'll give you more feed back then.
You take very great pictures and the text compliments each one very well. Each one is different yet create the same mood. I am excited to see the final outcome of it.
The Main Art computer lab and the Advanced Lab will be closed Aug 13-15. Students need to make sure their work is backed up. The computers will be cleared to prepare for next semester. No one will be allowed to use the computers during this time.
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Art Dept
Guys, the last day of lab will be on Saturday Aug. 9th ... 10am-2pm. Lab will be closed after that until fallsemester
Lab Hours
BLD 82 Art Lab Hours
12pm-4:30pm T-TH (Rezvan)
10am-2pm M-W (Danny)
10am-5pm Fri (Danny)
Sat . Sun (closed)
VOLUNTEERS FOR ART LAB NEEDED!
The SAIL lab has MACS! They have CS2, I promise. I called. If you have any trouble, ask for help!The SAIL Lab Hours: 7am-9pm MTWR & F 7am-5pm (S/S Closed)
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hmm. I wish they al had the same vibrancy as the first two. I realize that the text is the consistent part, but I think the feel of the pictures should all match your cover or be completely random all together. I think you should remove some of the question marks from the "where to" picture. I can't tell what the last word in the 4th image (not counting cover). I love the arrangement of the word "change," but I am not sure I like the font, and I wish the picture had something more to it. See if you can take pictures of really metallic things. When I think of your artwork stye I think shiny. It's going to be beautiful. Keep up your hard work!
jessica emrick
The images do look great.
You are right, it is very difficult to read them.I am having a hard time connecting each image with a notion of fetish that you write about, I just feel cold and industrial space with words that do not seem to have anything to do with that space.
I guess, while I am loving the look of the book, I am generally confused.
I am getting more of a sense that the book is more of a portfolio of your abilities and tastes than having a conceptual direction. You were on to something--bring it back.
I look forward to talking on Wednesday.
val
Hey Rezvan.
The red image is my favorite, I am attracted to its vibrancy. Runner up: the pipes, nice use of the object. Overall, very clean. See you in class Monday, I'll give you more feed back then.
Rebekah
Rezvan,
You take very great pictures and the text compliments each one very well. Each one is different yet create the same mood. I am excited to see the final outcome of it.
Karmeshia
Rezvan,
These look very nice, but I see that you have already published your book on a different blogger, so I will address my thoughts on it there! :)
Jeannine
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